Abstract should have been thoroughly edit and fact checked before ROI submission - lots of spelling mistakes/typos, and some rather long and convoluted sentences. I have not corrected all those in detail, please go through the abstract again. Importantly, should "IN" in the title be "IS"?

Other expressions that need correcting:

Countries are 'Parties to' not 'members of' the UNFCCC.

Second half of first sentence: suggest you remove the politics ('ambitious' target) and simply state that NZ has committed to reduce emissions by 30% below 2005 levels by 2030, subject to a range of conditions.

Livestock in NZ produce almost half of total emissions, not circa 30% as currently stated.