PGGRC has a few comments but is generally OK with presentation. Firstly I note that the the heritability has dropped to 0.11 what impact will this have on the commercialisation of the trait?  
Also in the acknowledgements the majority of the funding for this has come from PGGRC over the years so our preference is that we follow the convention of noting largest funder  first when the partnership is expressed to other parties.  I fully recognise that the logo is the other way around. 