Response to feedback via email.
1. A link to the draft of the white paper was sent to all ASGGN members prior to the ASGGN annual meeting in Dublin. 
www.asggn.org/publications,listing,82,first-draft-of-mpwg-white-paper.html
This was so people had time to read it before discussion at the meeting, or comment on if not going. Discussions on the document at the meeting was held, and I assume Grant reported back to NZAGRC on the outcomes of this annual meeting. 
2. The acknowledgements and disclaimer have been updated as suggested. 