Have tried to stay away from proposing changes where the information is generally correct, but could be written more clearly. A couple of typos picked up and a couple of other points to be changed.

Typos to be corrected:
p9 - SF6 not SF4
p11 - planet's
p12 - NZAGRC spelt incorrectly, Rangitikei region - region with small 'r'

Other points:
p11 - The Paris Agreement doesn't commit all countries to take action on climate change. It only commits the ones that have signed up to it. There are a couple that haven't signed!
p12 - Should be "about" 48% of New Zealand's greenhouse gas emissions come from agriculture. The actual percentage fluctuates slightly depending on a number of factors.
p28 - Sponsor information about the NZAGRC. Suggest the following instead...

The NZAGRC is a collaboration between the leading New Zealand research providers working in the agricultural greenhouse gas area and the Pastoral Greenhouse Gas Research Consortium (PGgRc). The NZAGRC was established by the Government in 2009 to better coordinate and fund New Zealand agricultural greenhouse gas research. The NZAGRC is working to bring low emission, cost-effective, simple solutions to New Zealand farms, and contribute world leading results to the international science community.  
